Because I know I will be asked, I am reprinting the poem here:
Reading a Hot Drink
When I write,
I pour my soul into the words
Where it swirls with the ink
And tastes like espresso
Marbled with the richest cream.
But when my daughter reads it,
Its flavor changes.
She delights in the hues of dark chocolate
With bobbing white dots of mini marshmallows.
My husband savors it as warm mulled cider
Stirred with a cinnamon stick.
My mother sips my poetry as tea,
Earl Grey, hot, with lowfat milk
And sweetener.
My father sees my words in their simplicity.
For him, the aroma of fresh black coffee is enough.
And there has been the occasional friend
That scalds her tongue on the hot water
With a twist of lemon
And politely smiles as she passes it back.
I’m not offended.
My soul has many flavors
When I mix it with ink.
5 comments:
I loved it the first time I read it and I love it still, possibly even more this time! Congratulations!!
Congratulations and excellent poem, Tina. Your poem is very true - everyone sees/hears something different when they read a poem, a story, a comic strip, etc. Some may love it, some may hate it - we are all different.
Love, Linda
Oh my good gravy, that's one fantastic poem!
I think this must be one of the poems I like best of all that I've read through so many lit classes nevermind that I didn't read yours for a class. It's very impressive and unforgetable. I absolutely love it. Congratulations! I'm so happy for you! :)
The images in your poem are so delicious! It's one of your best and one that I can savor time after time. Your poetry (no surprise) just gets better as you age. One benefit of growing older. Keep on writing. Love, Mom (Earl Grey hot)
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